#096: Bui Quynh Trang

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Hi everybody, my name’s Trang… Trang Quynh. Now what can I tell you about myself? Let’s begin at the beginning.

I’m Taurus myself, I was born on May 20, 1991. I was the first and the last children in my family. That means my parents have only me, sometimes I feel happy but in other cases, I feel sad and I want to have a younger sister or brother. Quang Phu is my hometown, but I wasnot brought up and went to school there. My first home is in Dong Son Ward, then we moved to Dong Phu Ward when I was 10 years old.

I had studied in Dong Phu Primary School, Dong PhuSecondary School and now I am studying in Dao Duy Tu High School. When I was studying in 11 grade, my parents’s marry broke up. As a result, I must stay with either my mother or my father, at last, I live with my father who can help me very much in my life. As a child, I donnot know what to say, I could only cry. Now, I regret, if I had advised my mom and my dad,my family couldnot have been broken.

In my school, I have many friends, they always beside me through thick and thin. Somes of them advise me not to collapse and bemyself. Of coure, I’ll live for me, for many people arround me. I allways try to smlie, and in truth I smile very more, I want to make my mom and my dad feel satisfactory when someone is speaking of me.

“You are an active girl” my friend said. Because I like playing sport,flying a kite, listening to music, reading newspaper and getting on the Net, ect. in my free time. Do you know? I draw very beautiful and I had received many certificate papers for my pictures. I like rain and I like all of coulors, but one of them that I like best is white, which symboys of healthy. If you want to know what food I like to eat, I’ll reply that is Vietnamese beef noodles.

About my dispposition, when you see me and get intouch with me, you will know. I’d prefer not to tell you about it, I want to make you are curious and I think I couldnot tell all about me in this contest. Morevover, I donot want to leak secrets.( Smile)

Now, I am studying in 11C3 in Dao Duy Tu High School, I’m a vice- learner. I like Math, Literature and English. In future, I want to be a banker, therefore I must study hard and try to receive high marks in next examination.

I find this contest is very helpful and interesting, it hefps me broaden my knowledge and compete with friends. I think my writting doesnot have any good mark because I am bad at writing and I donot create. But… if examining body read my writing, please tell me about mistakes that I have made in it. Thanks you very much! At last, I want to give you and many people who participate in this contest a famous saying:

“ All things are difficult before they are easy!”.

[nhanban]

Grade: pass.
Hi, Your introduction is more than what we expected from contestants. Your essay is sympathetic and vivic. Your feeling are shared to us. This is very importance in writting not only in English but also in other languages. However, to win the next round, you should pay more attention on the corrected errors. Especially, dont use abreviation in formal writting. Dont use too much complex sentences. Good luck.

Hi everybody, my name’s Trang… Trang Quynh. Now what can I tell you about myself? Let’s start at the beginning.

I’m Taurus myself(What do you mean?). I was born on May 20, 1991. I was the first and the last children in my family. That means my parents have only me, sometimes I feel happy but in other cases, I feel sad and I want to have a younger sister or brother. Quang Phu is my hometown, but I was not brought up and went to school there. My first home is in Dong Son Ward, then we moved to Dong Phu Ward when I was ten years old.

I had studied in Dong Phu Primary School, Dong Phu Secondary School and now I am studying in Dao Duy Tu High School. When I was studying in 11th grade class, my parents broke up. As a result, I must stay with either my mother or my father. At last, I decided to live with my father who can help me very much in my life. As a child, I did not know what to say, I could only cry. Now, I regret, if I had advised my mom and my dad,my family could not have been broken.

In my school, I have many friends, they always beside me through thick and thin. Some of them advise me not to collapse and be myself. Of coure, I will live for me, for many people arround me. I allways try to smile. And in truth I smile more and more. I want to make my mom and my dad feel satisfactory when someone is speaking of me.

“You are an active girl” my friend said. Because I like playing sport,flying a kite, listening to music, reading newspaper and getting on the Net, ect. in my free time. Do you know? I draw very well and I had received many certificate papers for my pictures. I like rain and I like all of colors, but which I like best is white, the symbol of healthy. If you want to know what food I like to eat, I’ll say that is Vietnamese beef noodles.

About my disposition, when you see me and get intouch with me, you will know. I’d prefer not to tell you about it, I want to make you are curious and I think I could not tell all about me in this contest. Morevover, I do not want to leak secrets.( Smile)

Now, I am studying in 11C3 in Dao Duy Tu High School, I’m a vice- learner. I like Math, Literature and English. In future, I want to be a banker, therefore I must study hard and try to receive high marks in the next examination.

I find this contest is very helpful and interesting, it helps me broaden my knowledge and compete with friends. I think my writting does not have any good mark because I am bad at writing and I do not create. But… if the judges read my writing, please tell me about mistakes that I have made in it. Thank you very much! At last, I want to give you and people who participate in this contest a famous saying:

“ All things are difficult before they are easy!”.