#127: Le Ha Phuong

[Tam_2407]

Hello everybody! I am a Vietnamese girl. My name is Le Ha Phuong. I’m sixteen years old. I will introduce about myself to you. I’m rather tall but thin. Everyone in my class said that I’m very good-natured, friendly and pleasant. My hobbies are reading book, listening to music and drawing. I like reading books such as: comics, novels, detective stories. Sometimes, I read books in English to enrich my vocabulary and knowledge. My favourite kinds of music are pop, R&B, hiphop… In short, I like youthful and modern music. In my free time, I spend a little time watching television. I think this is a method to broaden my knowledge or relax after a hard-worrking day. I like eating chicken, beef, seafoods, vegetables, fruits. I hate onion, pepper, garlic because their tastes. My favourite sport is playing badminton. Every morning, I play with my younger brother. I like honest, open-minded, amiable and truthful people. I don’t like people who are dishonest, selfish and arrogant. My favourite good saying is “ A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked.

I was born and grow up in Quang Binh which is a sunny and windy land. Now, I live with my small family. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My father is a worker. Everyday, he works hard at building site. He is a kind and humorous person. I always respect my father very much and try not to let him despair of me. My mother is a tailor. She has designed many clothes with different models and styles. Her job is making everybody more beautiful. She always busy with her work. Sometimes, she has to work all night to complete customers’ clothes. My mother is a person I love most. I have a younger brother. He is in grade three. He is very intelligent but very mischievous. I love all member of my family very much.

I have a best friend is Van. We grew up together. We have the same hobbies such as: music or art. When I am lucky, she congratulate me so I feel the happiness was increased double. When I am sad, she share with me or mobilize me. That time, the sadness was decreased. I’m always proud of our friendship.

Now, I’m in 10 English class in the gifted high school of Quang Binh . The distance from my house to school is about three kilometers. I usually go to school by bike with my cousin. If it is rain, I will go to school with my father by his motorbike. At school, I learn many subjects such as: Maths, Literature, Physics and so on but I like English best. The reason is simple. Nowadays, English is the most widely used language in the world. So I always try to learn English better. Little by little I like it more.
When I grow up, I want to become an English teacher to supply many knowledge to the students. I hope I will get my wish. My the biggest dream is “Every children in the world can go to school and live happily with their parents”

[Tocxu]

Hello everybody! I am a Vietnamese girl. My name is Le Ha Phuong. I’m sixteen years old. I will introduce about myself to you. I’m rather tall but thin. Everyone in my class said that I’m very good-natured, friendly and pleasant. My hobbies are reading book, listening to music and drawing. I like reading books such as: comics, novels, detective stories. Sometimes, I read books in English to enrich my vocabulary and knowledge. My favourite kinds of music are pop, R&B, hiphop… In short, I like youthful and modern music. In my free time, I spend a little time watching television. I think this is a method to broaden my knowledge or relax after a hard-worrking (working) day. I like eating chicken, beef, seafoods, vegetables, fruits. I hate onion, pepper, garlic because (of) their tastes. My favourite sport is playing badminton. Every morning, I play with my younger brother. I like honest, open-minded, amiable and truthful people. I don’t like people who are dishonest, selfish and arrogant. My favourite good (omit it) saying is “ A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked."

I was born and grow up in Quang Binh which is a sunny and windy land. Now, I live with my small family. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My father is a worker. Everyday, he works hard at building site. He is a kind and humorous person. I always respect my father very much and try not to let him despair of me. My mother is a tailor. She has designed many clothes with different models and styles. Her job is making everybody more beautiful (good point, I love it). She (is) always busy with her work. Sometimes, she has to work all night to complete customers’ clothes. My mother is a(the) person I love most. I have a younger brother. He is in grade three. He is very intelligent but very mischievous. I love all member of my family very much.

I have a best friend is(named) Van. We grew up together. We have the same hobbies such as: music or(and) art. When I am lucky, she congratulate(s) me so I feel the happiness was increased double (doubled). When I am sad, she share with me or mobilize (comforts) me. That time, the sadness was decreased (the tense of this sentence is not compatible with the previous one). I’m always proud of our friendship.

Now, I’m in 10 English class in the gifted high school of Quang Binh . The distance from my house to school is about three kilometers. I usually go to school by bike with my cousin. If it is rain(rains), I will (not needed) go to school with my father by his motorbike. At school, I learn many subjects such as: Maths, Literature, Physics and so on but I like English best. The reason is simple. Nowadays, English is the most widely used language in the world. So I always try to learn English better. Little by little I like it more. (good point)
When I grow up, I want to become an English teacher to supply many knowledge (if you use many, you have to put 's') to the students. I hope I will get (fulfill) my wish. My the biggest dream is “Every children in the world can go to school and live happily with their parents”

Judge: Linh Nguyen,

Score: Pass,

Dear Phuong,

Your self introduction is very good, interesting and rich of ideas. Just pay attention to some small error and try to weave your sentences together, you will be a very good writer.

Hope to see more from you in the second round.

Very best,

Linh Nguyen.

[dieuvuongqb]

Hello everybody! I am a Vietnamese girl. My name is Le Ha Phuong. I’m sixteen years old. I will introduce about myself to you. I’m rather tall but thin. Everyone in my class said that I’m very good-natured, friendly and pleasant. My hobbies are reading book, listening to music and drawing. I like reading books such as: comics, novels, detective stories. Sometimes, I read books in English to enrich my vocabulary and knowledge. My favourite kinds of music are pop, R&B, hiphop… In short, I like youthful and modern music. In my free time, I spend a little time watching television. I think this is a method to broaden my knowledge or relax after a hard-worrking day. I like eating chicken, beef, seafoods, vegetables, fruits. I hate onion, pepper, garlic because (of) their tastes. My favourite sport is playing badminton. Every morning, I play with my younger brother. I like honest, open-minded, amiable and truthful people. I don’t like people who are dishonest, selfish and arrogant. My favourite good (ommit it) saying is “ A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked."

@Tocxu: one more but small spelling error for the contestant ("hard-working" not "hard-worrking") and one for you (omit not "ommit"). Cheers

[Tocxu]

@Đức: Thanks a lot. I've made the changes.