#102: Nguyen Thi Ngoc Ha

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I am a Vietnamese girl. My full name is Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Hà. I am 16 years old. I live in Đồng Hới City , where is called “The Rose City on Nhật Lệ River” of Quảng Bình Province .

There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother and my younger brother. My father is a 44 year old soldier. He works in Quảng Trị Province and he is usually absent from house. My mother is a 39 year old tailor. She has a small dressmaker’s shop at home. She is a very nice lady and she usually makes new dress for me. My younger brother is a 9 year old boy. His school is Đồng Phú Primary School and he is an intelligent boy. I’m very proud of him.

I’m a student of 10 English class of the gifted high school of Quảng Bình . My school is a large one. I learn my lesson in school, such as Math, Literature, English, Chemistry and many others.. Of all these lessons I find Chemistry the most difficult to learn so I try my best to learn it well. I enjoy lerning English. It is a beautiful and important language.

I am bad at gymnastics but I like playing football. I play football with my brother every afternoon. It is really interesting.

In my free times, I usually listen to music, read the comic or Sunflower newspaper, draw pictures or sleep. I like pop music, sometimes rap and jazz. I’m not only like Vietnamese songs but also English ones. My favourite songs are “Proud of you”, “My love”, “Music Box Angel”, “Tuyet yeu thuong” and many others. Music makes my life getting vivid.

When I grow up, I wish to be an air hostess. If I become an air hostess, I can fly to the sky and to many foreign countries without any money. I can see many famous landscapes and meet many interesting foreigners to make new friends and tell them about my beautiful country. At the same time, I too can learn many more things. I hope that I will get my wish.

My close friends are all very funny and warmful. I love them very much. I am indeed a very happy girl. I hope that I will always be happy.







Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Hà_10 English class_The Gifted High School of QB

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I am a Vietnamese girl. My full name is Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Hà. I am 16 years old. I live in Đồng Hới City , where(which) is called “The Rose City on Nhật Lệ River” of Quảng Bình Province .

There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother and my younger brother. My father is a 44 year old soldier. He works in Quảng Trị Province and he is usually absent from house (home). My mother is a 39 year old tailor. She has a small dressmaker’s shop at home. She is a very nice lady and she usually makes new dress for me. My younger brother is a 9 year old boy. His school is Đồng Phú Primary School and he is an intelligent boy. I’m very proud of him.

I’m a student of 10 English class of the gifted high school of Quảng Bình . My school is a large one. I learn my lesson(s) in school, such as Math, Literature, English, Chemistry and many others.(.) Of all these lessons I find Chemistry the most difficult to learn so I try my best to learn it well. I enjoy le(a)rning English. It is a beautiful and important language.

I am bad at gymnastics but I like playing football. I play football with my brother every afternoon. It is really interesting.

In my free times, I usually listen to music, read the comic or Sunflower newspaper, draw pictures or sleep. I like pop music, sometimes rap and jazz. I’m (do) not only like Vietnamese songs but also English ones. My favourite songs are “Proud of you”, “My love”, “Music Box Angel”, “Tuyet yeu thuong”(,) and many others. Music makes my life (getting-omit this) vivid.

When I grow up, I wish to be an air hostess. If I become an air hostess, I can fly to the sky and to many foreign countries without any money. I can see many famous landscapes and meet many interesting foreigners to make new friends and tell them about my beautiful country. At the same time, I too can learn many more things. I hope that I will get(fulfill) my wish.

My close friends are all very funny and warmful (warm). I love them very much. I am indeed a very happy girl. I hope that I will always be happy.

Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Hà_10 English class_The Gifted High School of QB

Judge: Linh Nguyen,

Score: Pass,

A very good introduction, almost errors free and of adequate content. Keep moving on. You will be a very good write in the future.